Shark finning is a fishing industry that collects shark and skin the fins off the sharks, sometimes they would catch and fin them alive and throw them out to let them slowly die. Sharkfin soup is a delicacy in China that dates back to AD 968, it was created by an emperor and it was created as a sign of the emperors status and wealth.
Finning sharks disrupts the food chain, as the apex predator of the ocean, if sharks went extinct then the next stage of the food chain will be overpopulated and will go extinct and will continue to repeat until there are no more fish left in the ocean.
Hey Vin,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote your blogging questions into paragraphs and wrote it with complete sentence structure. I also like how straightforward and simple this post is. It is a terrible gruesome practice isn't it? Maybe next time add a little introduction to your post but other than that you've made an excellent job with this post. Keep up the great work.
Hey big homie,
ReplyDeleteYou may have failed the vibe check but this is a very great piece of writing,it's well structured and I can understand your explanation well. Next time you're posting try to use more descriptive language to give your post a pop and pull in interested readers.
Thanks for your time,
Kody
Ki Ora Vin.
ReplyDeleteYour blogpost is well written, it's clear and understandable. You've also used significant and relevant information, which I really like. Lastly, I like that you included a photo. Next time, it would be really helpful and interesting if you added facts and datas.
Great feed back friend :)
DeleteAnnyeong Vin,
ReplyDeleteThis is a well written blog post about Shark Finning. I like that you have included a photo of what the tragedy might look like. I also like how you wrote you're blog questions into paragraphs. Maybe next time you could include interesting facts to make your writing more fun to read. Anyways I enjoyed your blog post and keep up the great work.