I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 16 August 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Vin, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting and I like how you said we sell planes. I also like that you made a phone number for it.
Next time you could give us a bit of information about why you made the card in the first place.
BYE!
Hey Vin,Tamani Here I really like how you put a Plane than a tag that said how much the plane cost also I like how you got the model of the head. Maybe next time you could tell us more about what you do at you company. If you can please check out my blog and be sure to leave a comment.
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon vin I like the fact that there's a phone number and a price that would be suitable for a plane but you need to put more info about your comepany, why you made a card and tell more about the planes
ReplyDeleteHi vin this post you did good but next time you write mite be abale more and Iksplan more about the plans that you sell this is good i like how you put the price.this is good keep the good work up bye.
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